PinkPistol620's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Rise Before the Fall]

hate to bother about this

My only bit to comment on is how the pose seems to be so still while the anatomy of the picture suggests movement. I guess it seems like she's taking an abrupt halt and I would wish to see her shoulders less squared and more into the movement.

Also, the hand is quite tiny. but that's it for me.

[In the dark skies]

Overall, great.

When critiquing this, I would only have these two suggestions. The color scheme and shading is nice, and the lines are good for the effect, but I would like to see a bit more detail on all of the dragons, instead of just highlighting the purple one. Also, the only difference in their poses are the way the tail is swished. A bit more variation would put more personality to them and make them seem altogether more realistic, even though it's a hard thing to do in a drawing like this. One's head could be lowered, another could be displaying an expression, small things like that.

As just a regular person, I think it's fine :D

Ryunohito responds:

i know what you mean, i look at it and think i could've done better, could've done more with the dragons. thinking about it though, I do remember this being an older piece of mine. So had I made this as of late I probably would have done more to it.
Thanks though :)