There are some things to improve on, but not much. What really stood out is that the bell could probably be toned down and the transition half way through could be done a bit more smoothly
Otherwise it's a good and catchy song.
Thanks for the advice. :)
If you either toned down the introduction or added some louder bass background to the main part of the song it would help. But that's it. It's a good song, otherwise.
Thank you :)
Feel free to check out my newer music :p
This is probably gonna be in my head for a week...
:D :D and I dont mind
Props on the #1 spot!
One of the best vocal kinds of songs here. Sounds like Fall Out Boy quality :3
despite the fact that Im still kinda scared
that was perfect in a weird, retarded, and mentally disturbed way. 5/5 9/10
Lol thanks thats what I do
a good start
I have some advice:
try to have new instruments come in in a dimmed volume getting louder. Then it seems more natural.
build the song up. right now it is pretty random, so try to create a climatic point that dims down.
Thanks, I like the idea of a rise in vomlume level for effect and i know it is pretty random lol, i'll work on it some more and make it more organized.
When I started listening I was like "..." but then it started to sound awesome when the actual notes came in. FAVORITED
I review because you said nobody reviewed this. Mwahahahah
If you ever get around to checking this Id just like to say its the fact that you started submitting stuff to newgrounds that I decided to to beat you at it. Be honored :D
Review: I like the inconsistancy of the song. Its ever changing which makes it easier to listen to. Please do more!
Love it love it love it love it
Thx alot! =)
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