Pretty good.
There are some things to improve on, but not much. What really stood out is that the bell could probably be toned down and the transition half way through could be done a bit more smoothly
Otherwise it's a good and catchy song.
Pretty good.
There are some things to improve on, but not much. What really stood out is that the bell could probably be toned down and the transition half way through could be done a bit more smoothly
Otherwise it's a good and catchy song.
Thanks for the advice. :)
Nice
If you either toned down the introduction or added some louder bass background to the main part of the song it would help. But that's it. It's a good song, otherwise.
Thank you :)
Feel free to check out my newer music :p
despite the fact that Im still kinda scared
that was perfect in a weird, retarded, and mentally disturbed way. 5/5 9/10
Lol thanks thats what I do
a good start
I have some advice:
try to have new instruments come in in a dimmed volume getting louder. Then it seems more natural.
build the song up. right now it is pretty random, so try to create a climatic point that dims down.
Thanks, I like the idea of a rise in vomlume level for effect and i know it is pretty random lol, i'll work on it some more and make it more organized.
Thanks again.
Nice
Love it love it love it love it
Not bad
Your style is so unique. I never heard anything like it. I have to admit that the beat was good though the voice was kidna odd. Im not saying take it out though. That's what I love about your music
Well thanks for reviewing glad you like it :D
Cant help following the beat
This is really good. My only trouble is that I think a little more could go on so its not repetitive
Yea i no wat ur sayin i'll keep tht in mind
thx
Nice
Its slightly repetitive but dont listen to me. Its great.
yeah i know but im not creativ enough to make 4 min without repeats
This is really pretty
I like the pace to the music. Immediate download
thanks for the comment :)
Nice
Its a good song but it's kinda short. You couldve added alot more to it
Yeah I know ;D Just trying out my new guitar anyways so :)
Official Axel Fangirl
Age 29, Female
Undercover Alien
Not your business
Behind you >:D
Joined on 9/1/08